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Weekend Writing Warrior – 11/10/13

Posted on Nov 10, 2013 by Maggie Wells   10 Comments | Posted in Blog

Here’s a bit more from Going Deep:

““You were so snotty to me all through school.”

“I was scared shitless of you.”

“You were condescending and rude,” she retorted.

“Still am.” A wry smile twisted his lips. “And by the time I outgrew being scared, you were way out of my reach.” He framed her face with his hands, his palms cradling her cheeks and his long fingers stroking the tender lobes of her ears. “But you’re not now.”

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10 Responses to "Weekend Writing Warrior – 11/10/13"

  1. Comment by Evelyn Jules
    November 10, 2013 at 8:21 am  

    Holy moly. I’m within reach too. Maybe. *stretches* Awesome eight, Maggie! 🙂

  2. Comment by veronicascott
    November 10, 2013 at 9:08 am  

    Well ok, they got that out of the way! Fun snippet, like the way the scene melted into tenderness on his part…

  3. Comment by Anne Lange
    November 10, 2013 at 10:24 am  

    I loved it! Funny, snarky and tender. He’s so sweet. 🙂

  4. Comment by Laurie
    November 10, 2013 at 10:45 am  

    Funny how we mask our true feelings. Now she knows how he felt all those years ago. Great eight.

  5. Comment by historysleuth1
    November 10, 2013 at 11:03 am  

    Awww, that was romantic! You got across well in your writing how slanted we view things and people when we’re in high school.
    History Sleuth’s Milk Carton Murders

  6. Comment by burnsmillie
    November 10, 2013 at 11:47 am  

    Cute. Will she melt?

  7. Comment by Gemma Parkes
    November 10, 2013 at 1:52 pm  

    I love the honesty and the romance shown here!

  8. Comment by Shannyn Schroeder
    November 10, 2013 at 3:30 pm  

    Fabulous 8 – I like a guy who can admit to being a little intimidated.

  9. Comment by caitlinstern
    November 10, 2013 at 5:25 pm  

    Why is she no longer out of reach? Is he saying she’s fallen some? 😛

    Nice back and forth conversation–it’s amazing how people can misunderstand each other…

  10. Comment by Linda Hamonou
    November 11, 2013 at 11:26 am  

    I wonder if telling her that he can get her now is going to work…

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