Maggie Wells | Margaret Ethridge

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Weekend Writing Warrior – 12/20/15

Posted on Dec 20, 2015 by Maggie Wells   4 Comments | Posted in Blog

For those of you still reading along, here’s more from  LOVE AND ROCKETS (Coastal Heat #3) Coming in October 2016!

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The second she spotted Jake Dalton sitting alone in her last empty booth, her heart leaped into her throat and swelled like a bullfrog. Regret and nerves did a tango in her tummy. Ducking her head, she busied herself with delivering her orders. She managed to kill another three minutes refilling water glasses and depositing hastily scrawled tickets on several table tops before she forced herself to fill a cup with sweet tea, drop two wedges of lemon on top, and make her way to him.
As much as she hated apologizing to anyone for anything, it was particularly galling to have to spew ‘I’m sorries’ to a St. Pat’s grad. She’d admit Jake was a thousand times better than most of her former schoolmates, but still. It was hard.

 

From the moment she left her parents’ house, she did her level best to have little to do with the life she’d lived before Gracie came along. It hadn’t been terribly hard to sever the ties. Most of her so-called friends had stopped talking to her the second she began showing. The rest fell victim to natural attrition.

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4 Responses to "Weekend Writing Warrior – 12/20/15"

  1. Comment by Brinda
    December 20, 2015 at 7:31 am  

    I love this excerpt!

  2. Comment by Amalie Cantor
    December 20, 2015 at 10:18 am  

    I really really like this bit, particularly your use of metaphor. “Regret and nerves did a tango in her tummy.” It sounds like her relationship with him (however small or large it has been) has been complicated by her past. Very intriguing snippet! Thanks so much for sharing!

  3. Comment by Evelyn Jules
    December 20, 2015 at 7:09 pm  

    You reveal so much about this character in your excerpt, Maggie. Very strongly written! 🙂

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