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Weekend Writing Warrior – 3/29/15

Posted on Mar 29, 2015 by Maggie Wells   11 Comments | Posted in Blog

Here are eight more from  my work in progress, Play Dates. It’s a contemporary romance about a woman whose little niece helps her snag the man of her dreams.

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“You know, you have to pick your battles,” he said with a rueful shake of his head. “I fought it to start, but then you realize it just doesn’t matter. I mean, girls play with trucks and Legos and stuff, right?”

“Was that supposed to somehow sound less sexist?”

He had the good grace to wince. “In my head it sounded better.” Rocking back on his heels, he shot her a sidelong glance and dropped his voice to a conspiratorial whisper. “I haven’t done this in a while.”

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That’s all I have for now. Be sure to check out all of the Weekend Writing Warrior posts here.

Happy Sunday!

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11 Responses to "Weekend Writing Warrior – 3/29/15"

  1. Comment by Gemma Parkes
    March 29, 2015 at 8:38 am  

    Aw, he sounds sweet! At least he realises when his words don’t come out as they should!

  2. Comment by Jess Schira
    March 29, 2015 at 10:55 am  

    Awww … he’s trying really hard. She should cut him some slack. Great snippet Maggie!

  3. Comment by Charmaine Gordon
    March 29, 2015 at 12:43 pm  

    Touching combined with humor. That’s you. Neat snippet.

  4. Comment by Evelyn Jules
    March 29, 2015 at 1:33 pm  

    There is nothing more attractive than a man who’s honest. Fabulous excerpt, Maggie! Can’t wait for more! 🙂

  5. Comment by Carol
    March 29, 2015 at 1:47 pm  

    I love a good sidelong glance. And I’m lovin’ this couple, too! Anxiously awaiting more…

  6. Comment by Michelle Howard
    March 29, 2015 at 5:36 pm  

    awww. his dialogue makes him sexy and sweet at the same time

  7. Comment by Ute Carbone
    March 29, 2015 at 6:49 pm  

    Love him, Maggie! He’s willing to be honest. Great snippet

  8. Comment by Denisea Kampe
    March 30, 2015 at 12:19 am  

    You can almost hear his pulse speed up and feel him sweat it a little bit. Love a guy who’s got such great potential!

  9. Comment by KC Lowe
    March 30, 2015 at 12:59 am  

    Love this snippet! Your male character is really real and likeable 🙂

  10. Comment by Caitlin Stern
    March 30, 2015 at 4:36 am  

    At least he’s trying, right? And lots of people put their foot in their mouth when they’re nervous.

  11. Comment by Veronica Scott
    March 31, 2015 at 10:27 pm  

    I like him, he does get it….enjoyed the snippet!

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