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Weekend Writing Warrior – 4/12/15

Posted on Apr 12, 2015 by Maggie Wells   9 Comments | Posted in Blog

Here are eight more from  my work in progress, Play Dates. It’s a contemporary romance about a woman whose little niece helps her snag the man of her dreams. Monica is explaining to her sister how she met the hot single dad in the park.

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Without breaking eye contact, she woke her phone from its electronic slumber and unerringly tapped the button to open the camera app. She held the phone out, but kept her focus locked on her sister even after Melody’s gaze dropped to the screen and she gasped. “Holy cra…crepes,” she corrected at the last second.

“Crepes?”

“Last week, I heard Emma tell some poor kid at tumbling that her somersaults looked like crap, so I have to watch it.” Mel darted a glance at the kitchen door, then lunged for the phone. Cradling it in both hands, she openly ogled the picture Monica had snapped that morning. “This is him for real?”

 

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That’s all I have for now. Be sure to check out all of the Weekend Writing Warrior posts here.

Happy Sunday!

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9 Responses to "Weekend Writing Warrior – 4/12/15"

  1. Comment by Evelyn Jules
    April 12, 2015 at 12:18 pm  

    Holy crepes, this is great! 😀 Totally loving this story, Maggie! Awesome job!

  2. Comment by Charmaine Gordon
    April 12, 2015 at 12:54 pm  

    I second the motion of Evelyn’s comment. Terrific eigth

  3. Comment by Gemma Parkes
    April 12, 2015 at 1:10 pm  

    I wish I could take a peek at that phone screen! Lovely, realistic scene.

  4. Comment by ED Martin
    April 12, 2015 at 5:12 pm  

    I love that “holy crepes” line!

  5. Comment by Caitlin Stern
    April 12, 2015 at 5:52 pm  

    I love her cradling the phone, like she’s thinking “my preciousss…”

  6. Comment by Carol
    April 12, 2015 at 9:41 pm  

    Like baby crepes? Hee. You know they say a picture is worth a 1000 words… Fun story!

  7. Comment by Veronica Scott
    April 12, 2015 at 11:27 pm  

    Such a realistic conversation! Holy crepes indeed LOL. I want to see the picture of the hot guy…really a great 8!

  8. Comment by Edward Hoornaert
    April 13, 2015 at 3:45 am  

    Merde et sacre bleu! Nice writing, very smooth and easy to picture.

  9. Comment by Michelle Howard
    April 13, 2015 at 10:49 pm  

    I love how you catch the sister gossip moment so clearly

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