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Weekend Writing Warrior – 5/24/15

Posted on May 24, 2015 by Maggie Wells   11 Comments | Posted in Blog

Okay! This week I am back to sharing bits of my current WIP, Play Dates, the first book in what I hope will be a series featuring some hot single dads and the women who capture their hearts! When last we saw them, Monica accepts a date with Colm, but she doesn’t tell him that the little girl she had in the park with her was her niece, and not her daughter. It’s their first evening out, and our hero is a bit smitten.

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He had to stop looking down her blouse. Well, not really down her blouse, at at her blouse. The spot where the two sides of it criss-crossed. Right there. And if he didn’t stop gawking, she was going to notice. And here he’d been so proud of himself for walking the block and a half to La Casita without falling at her feet. Then again, if he had, he probably would have taken the opportunity to peek up her skirt.

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11 Responses to "Weekend Writing Warrior – 5/24/15"

  1. Comment by Carol
    May 24, 2015 at 1:18 pm  

    If nothing else, it sounds like Monica certainly knows how to dress for a date! Love these two already – can’t wait for the sparks to fly!

  2. Comment by Sara Barnard (@TheSaraBarnard)
    May 24, 2015 at 1:27 pm  

    I agree with Carol, Monica’s dressing seems to have sent him over the edge already!

  3. Comment by Evelyn Jules
    May 24, 2015 at 2:12 pm  

    Hee! This guy’s got it bad. I’m so loving the snippets you’re sharing from this book. It’s quirky and lighthearted and full of surprises! 🙂

  4. Comment by Linda Hamonou
    May 24, 2015 at 3:50 pm  

    Someone seems to have a sight control problem. haha, too funny.

  5. Comment by Eden Mabee
    May 24, 2015 at 4:07 pm  

    Our young lad has some serious focus issues. Eyes on her face, m’boy. She’ll like that too… and you’ll get a sneak peak into how she feels about you as well.

    Maggie, just wanted to not you had a double “at” in the second sentence at the end of the line. (I miss these all the time.)

    • Comment by Maggie Wells
      May 24, 2015 at 4:38 pm  

      Thanks for catching that!

  6. Comment by Veronica Scott
    May 24, 2015 at 4:17 pm  

    Oh my, he surely is smitten! Fun snippet…

  7. Comment by Ashley York
    May 24, 2015 at 5:27 pm  

    Hmm, very interesting set up. Nice eight.

  8. Comment by Maggie Wells
    May 25, 2015 at 1:04 am  

    Thanks, all! I’m having a good time writing this one!

  9. Comment by Caitlin Stern
    May 25, 2015 at 2:24 am  

    The edges of clothing can be a little distracting, especially when they go low–but he can keep it together, I’m sure.

  10. Comment by Edward Hoornaert
    May 25, 2015 at 7:13 pm  

    Does Colm really expect us to believe he wasn’t actually staring DOWN her blouse? Seems like his infatuation might just be testing the limits of his gentlemanliness!

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